Talk:Generals:King Raptor

The last revert
OK, the last revert by me was a little harsh, given the amount of time that an obviously enthusiastic contributor had spent on it. Apologies for my laziness, but it required a complete re-working...so I'd encourage the guy to add it again with the following in mind:


 * Generals is past tense. You've got the in-universe bit bang on and I thank you sincerely for that, but keep it in the past tense.
 * Don't invent too much stuff. Extrapolate on the game a bit but not too much. (Sorry, I feel very nerdy for saying that 'cos it's fun to read fan-fic type stuff, but we're pretty much just keeping it within the games here.)
 * Keep it on the King Raptor rather than just Raptors in general. Don't forget there's a Raptor article in which to mention all the times that the boggo-standard Raptor saved the World.

I might go back and work some of your stuff back in, but for now, I have to go and deal with that IP-banned fool's edits until Mikael shows up. Makron1n 19:21, 6 May 2008 (UTC)